Old man Shoes
I wrote this poem as a response to Intimately Intricate (on Medium)’s April Prompt: New Dawn. The poem was chosen for publication here:
Intimately Intricate April Prompt New Dawn
As is true of many poetry prompts, my poem will often take me into uncharted waters…in this poem I wrote from the perspective of a young boy, and used HUMOR in my poem. WHOA. That is pretty different for me! Tell me what you think…

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Old Man Shoes
I am told the new dawn came
while I slept fitfully
wrapped in the taco of a dream.
Or a dream Of a taco
though I’m not sure which.
I am told it was quite spectacular
but I slept way too shortly
and woke up rather hungry
and somehow wanting cheese.
Was misty and spooky
He said to me, while I chased
colored hoops with a spoon
Is that so, I said halfheartedly
You bet! He said and hiked up
his socks, slipping on his
old man shoes.
I in my pj’s and you in your suit
I sure don’t want to be you
If that means the new dawn comes
and I don’t get my usual snooze.
Hey Dad, I said wiping milk
off my chin, Yeah son? You said
with a scruff on my head…
Can we have tacos soon?
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